My Cinquain
Dreaming
Quietly
In my tent
Saturday night
To the sounds of the crickets
When the bear came and ate our food
posted by theoperatived @ 10:21 PM
1 comments
Tuesday, May 08, 2007
Quietly
In my tent
Saturday night
To the sounds of the crickets
When the bear came and ate our food
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1 Comments:
Nice cinquain! I like how the dependent clause at the end is a turn from the tranquil mood and adds a bit of humor!
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