Wednesday, May 07, 2008

cinquain: An RA

Chewing

There

All alone

Under the tree

To eat my apple

Because I am tired of listening

1 Comments:

At 5:55 PM, Blogger Liz said...

This really good. It is an interesting interpretation of eating an apple. I don't see any grammatical mistakes, therefore I can not tell you to change anything. Good job!

 

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