My adverbial poem
Standing
Strong
For myself
One long judgment
To gain a career
Because I believe in my ability to succeed
Strong
For myself
One long judgment
To gain a career
Because I believe in my ability to succeed
posted by Anonymous @ 8:13 PM
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2 Comments:
I really like your topic. However, it doesn't seem like your noun phrase is modifying "standing."
Nice poem. I agree with Rachel though about the noun phrase not modifying "standing." Perhaps flip lines three and four and modify "one long judgement" to "in the face of judgement" or something of the like.
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