Pulse
Pulse
Heartbeat
In the tips
Of his fingers
Trembles the fabric
Of the sheets over us
Did I do that right? Was I supposed to identify the parts of the cinquain? Page 134 nor the assignment doesn't say to do any of that.
posted by Rose @ 5:49 PM
2 comments
2 Comments:
Quite risque! I think you did it correctly. In that you don't need to explain, just post, the actual poem.
Rose, I like your cinquain!! However, I think the second to last line needs to be in the infinitive and the last line should be a clause. Example -
to tremble under the fabric
because the silky sheets lay over us. But, I don't know because this assignment was fairly difficult for me. Other than that, I really liked.
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